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What is descriptive writing?

Description is communication that makes a place, object, person, group or physical entity vivid for the reader.
It is one of the four rhetorical modes (modes of discourse), alongside exposition, argumentation and narration.
In fiction, description is the mode for transmitting a mental image of the particulars of a story.
It works together with other fiction-writing modes such as dialogue, narration, exposition and summarisation.
Good description is more than amassing details: it brings something to life by carefully choosing and arranging words and phrases to produce the desired effect.

Planning a description

Decide what you are describing: a place, a person or a moment.
Choose the desired effect you want the description to have on the reader before you start writing.
Select details that serve that effect, and leave out details that do not.
Plan the order in which details will be revealed, so the description unfolds clearly.
Think about the dominant impression you want to leave and arrange words and phrases to create it.

Showing, not telling

Show by giving specific, concrete details rather than telling the reader a general judgement.
Instead of stating an emotion, present the observable details that reveal it.
Let the reader infer meaning from carefully chosen particulars.
Avoid vague summaries; give the reader something to see, hear or feel.

Using the senses

Draw on sight, sound, smell, touch and taste to make a description vivid.
Sensory details create a mental image of the particulars of a scene.
Choose sensory details that support the desired effect, not just any detail.
Combining senses can make a description more immersive and believable.

Choosing words: nouns, verbs, adjectives

Use precise nouns to name exactly what is there.
Use powerful verbs to convey action and energy.
Choose adjectives carefully; a few well-chosen ones are stronger than many weak ones.
Avoid overloading a description with adjectives, which can weaken the effect.
Word choice should serve the desired effect and the dominant impression.

Figurative language

Figurative language (such as metaphor and simile) can help create vivid mental images.
Use figures of speech to bring something to life, not merely to decorate.
Elaborate figures used without purpose can make writing feel strained or overwrought.
Keep figurative language consistent with the desired effect and the tone of the piece.

Zooming in and out

Zoom in to focus on a small, telling detail.
Zoom out to give the reader the wider scene or context.
Moving between close and wide views helps control pace and emphasis.
Use zooming to guide the reader's attention to what matters most.

Varying sentences for effect

Vary sentence length and structure to create rhythm and emphasis.
Short sentences can sharpen a moment; longer sentences can build detail and flow.
Vary sentence openings so the writing does not become monotonous.
Sentence variety helps produce the desired effect on the reader.

Avoiding cliché and purple prose

A purple patch is an over-written passage in which the writer has strained too hard to achieve an impressive effect.
The term comes from the Latin purpureus pannus, first used by the Roman poet Horace in his×Ars Poetica×(c. 20 BC).
Horace used it to denote an irrelevant and excessively ornate passage; in modern usage the sense of irrelevance is usually absent, though such passages are often incongruous.
Purple prose is lavishly figurative, rhythmic or otherwise overwrought.
Avoid cliché by choosing fresh, precise language rather than familiar, worn-out phrases.
Restraint and careful word choice are more effective than straining for an impressive effect.

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1.Which word class describes a word that names a person, place, thing or idea?
Easy
- Anoun
- Bverb
- Cadjective
- Dadverb
2.Which sentence uses the correct punctuation to mark a parenthesis?
Easy
- AThe beach, which was crowded, smelled of salt.
- BThe beach which, was crowded smelled of salt.
- CThe beach which was crowded, smelled of salt.
- DThe beach which was crowded smelled, of salt.
3.Which sentence uses the correct spelling?
Medium
- AThe old house had a separate entrance.
- BThe old house had a seperate entrance.
- CThe old house had a seperrate entrance.
- DThe old house had a seperat entrance.
4.Which sentence uses the semicolon correctly?
Medium
- AThe market was busy; the stalls overflowed with fruit.
- BThe market was busy; and the stalls overflowed with fruit.
- CThe market was busy; because the stalls overflowed with fruit.
- DThe market was busy; which the stalls overflowed with fruit.
5.Which sentence is the best example of 'showing not telling' in descriptive writing?
Medium
- AHer hands trembled as she reached for the letter.
- BShe was very nervous.
- CShe felt a strong emotion.
- DShe was scared and anxious.
6.Which sentence contains an example of personification?
Hard
- AThe wind whispered through the empty streets.
- BThe wind was as cold as ice.
- CThe wind blew strongly all night.
- DThe wind was colder than yesterday.
7.Which sentence is an example of purple prose?
Hard
- AThe cerulean canopy of heaven wept its crystalline tears upon the verdant bosom of the earth.
- BRain fell on the green fields.
- CThe sky was blue and the grass was green.
- DIt rained all afternoon.
8.Which sentence is a cliché that a descriptive writer should avoid?
Challenge
- AIt was a dark and stormy night.
- BThe rain hammered the tin roof.
- CGrey clouds swallowed the last of the light.
- DPuddles shivered in the gutter.

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9.Which punctuation mark is used to show possession, as in 'the girl's coat'?
Easy
- Aapostrophe
- Bcomma
- Ccolon
- Dhyphen
10.Which sentence uses the correct form of 'there', 'their' or 'they're'?
Medium
- AThey're going to the market.
- BTheir going to the market.
- CThere going to the market.
- DTheyre going to the market.
11.Which sentence uses the colon correctly?
Medium
- AShe had one goal: to reach the summit.
- BShe had one goal, to reach the summit.
- CShe had one goal; to reach the summit.
- DShe had one goal to: reach the summit.
12.Which sentence uses an adverb to modify a verb?
Medium
- AShe walked slowly along the pier.
- BShe walked a slow walk along the pier.
- CShe walked a slow, slow pier.
- DShe walked the slow pier.
13.Which of the following are recognised fiction-writing modes? (select all that apply)
Medium
- Aaction
- Bdescription
- Cdialogue
- Dsubtraction
- Esummary
14.According to the description of the craft, which of the following are true of good description? (select all that apply)
Medium
- AIt aims to make a place, object or person vivid.
- BIt is simply the amassing of as many details as possible.
- CIt brings something to life by carefully choosing and arranging words.
- DIt is one of the four rhetorical modes.
- EIt should avoid all figurative language.
15.Match each term to its correct meaning.
Medium
- description
- purple prose
- rhetorical modes
- communication that makes a place, object or person vivid
- overwritten, lavishly figurative writing
- exposition, argumentation, narration and description
16.Order these steps of planning and writing a description into the most sensible sequence.
Medium
- Choose precise nouns, powerful verbs and careful adjectives
- Plan what place, person or moment you will describe
- Vary sentence lengths for effect
- Zoom in on a small detail
17.Description is one of the four rhetorical modes, along with exposition, argumentation and narration.
Easy
True or false?
18.Purple prose is writing that is deliberately kept plain and simple to avoid any figurative language.
Easy
True or false?
19.Which of these sentences are examples of clichés a descriptive writer should avoid? (select all that apply)
Medium
- AHer heart was as cold as ice.
- BThe sun beat down mercilessly.
- CThe kettle clicked off and steam fogged the window.
- DIt was a dark and stormy night.
20.Which sentence uses the correct form of 'its' or 'it's'?
Medium
- AThe old house had lost it's roof in the storm.
- BThe old house had lost its roof in the storm.
- CThe old house had lost its' roof in the storm.
- DThe old house had lost it is roof in the storm.
21.Which sentence correctly uses a comma to separate an introductory phrase from the main clause?
Medium
- AAfter the storm the garden was, in ruins.
- BAfter the storm, the garden was in ruins.
- CAfter, the storm the garden was in ruins.
- DAfter the storm the garden, was in ruins.
22.Which sentence uses the dash correctly to add extra information?
Medium
- AThe market—was busy—with shoppers.
- BThe market was busy with shoppers—.
- CThe market—was busy with shoppers.
- DThe market was busy—with shoppers—on Saturday.
23.Which sentence uses the apostrophe correctly to show plural possession?
Medium
- AThe girls' coats were hung on the pegs.
- BThe girl's coats were hung on the pegs.
- CThe girls coats' were hung on the pegs.
- DThe girls's coats were hung on the pegs.
24.Which sentence uses the correct form of 'who's' or 'whose'?
Medium
- AThe writer who's description was best won a prize.
- BThe writer whose description was best won a prize.
- CThe writer whose's description was best won a prize.
25.Which sentence uses the correct form of 'your' or 'you're'?
Medium
- AYour going to love this description.
- BYou're going to love this description.
- CYoure going to love this description.
- DYour'e going to love this description.
26.Which sentence uses the correct form of 'affect' or 'effect'?
Medium
- AThe storm had a powerful affect on the village.
- BThe storm had a powerful effect on the village.
- CThe storm had a powerful effects on the village.
- DThe storm had a powerful effecting on the village.
27.Which sentence uses the correct form of 'their', 'there' or 'they're'?
Medium
- ATheir going to visit the castle.
- BThere going to visit the castle.
- CThey're going to visit the castle.
- DTheyre going to visit the castle.
28.Which sentence uses the correct form of 'practice' or 'practise'?
Medium
- AShe decided to practice her description every day.
- BShe decided to practise her description every day.
- CShe decided to practices her description every day.
29.Which sentence uses the correct form of 'lie' or 'lay'?
Medium
- AShe decided to lay down on the grass.
- BShe decided to lie down on the grass.
- CShe decided to laid down on the grass.
- DShe decided to lain down on the grass.
30.Read this sentence: 'The market was a stew of noise: vendors shouting, radios crackling, a baby wailing somewhere near the fruit stalls.' What is the main purpose of the list of sounds?
Medium
- ATo make the scene vivid by arranging specific details of sound
- BTo explain the causes of noise pollution in markets
- CTo argue that markets should be quieter places
- DTo summarise the whole day in a single clause
31.Read this sentence: 'The market was a stew of noise.' What is the effect of the metaphor 'stew'?
Medium
- AIt suggests a thick, mixed, simmering blend of sounds that surrounds the listener
- BIt suggests the market is clean and well organised
- CIt suggests the market is silent and empty
- DIt suggests the writer dislikes cooked food
32.Read this sentence: 'The old pier groaned as the tide pulled at its legs.' Which technique is used?
Medium
- APersonification
- BSimile
- CAlliteration
- DOnomatopoeia
33.Read this sentence: 'The old pier groaned as the tide pulled at its legs.' What is the most likely effect of the personification?
Hard
- AIt makes the pier seem alive and suffering, which creates a gloomy, slightly threatening mood
- BIt makes the pier seem brand new and well maintained
- CIt proves the writer has measured the tide
- DIt shows the writer is afraid of the sea
34.Read this sentence: 'Light spilled across the floor like warm milk.' Which word is the vehicle of the simile?
Medium
- AMilk
- BLight
- CFloor
- DSpilled
35.Read this extract: 'The beach was a battlefield of broken shells. Gulls screamed overhead, and the wind threw sand into my eyes.' Which statement best describes the overall effect of the description?
Hard
- AIt creates a harsh, hostile atmosphere through violent verbs and warlike imagery
- BIt creates a peaceful, relaxing atmosphere through gentle verbs
- CIt creates a comic atmosphere through jokes and puns
- DIt creates a mysterious atmosphere by withholding all details
36.Read this sentence: 'The room was empty.' Which revision best shows rather than tells?
Medium
- ADust sheets covered the furniture, and a single cobweb trembled in the draught
- BThe room was very, very empty indeed
- CThe room had no people, objects or furniture in it at all
- DThe room was empty, which made it feel empty
37.Read this sentence: 'The train slid out of the station, and the platform grew small, then smaller, then nothing.' What is the effect of the repeated comparatives?
Medium
- AThey mimic the gradual shrinking of the platform as the train moves away
- BThey show that the platform is actually growing
- CThey prove the train is moving backwards
- DThey make the sentence sound like a list of instructions
38.Read this extract: 'The city at dawn: shutters rattling up, the smell of bread, a first bus sighing at the lights.' Which technique is most clearly used to structure the description?
Hard
- AZooming in on small, specific details rather than giving a general overview
- BSummarising the whole city in one abstract statement
- CArguing that cities are better than towns
- DExplaining the history of public transport
39.Read this sentence: 'The garden was nice, with nice flowers and a nice smell.' What is the main weakness of this description?
Medium
- AThe adjective 'nice' is vague and does not give the reader a precise image
- BThe sentence is too short to be a description
- CThe sentence uses too many powerful verbs
- DThe sentence contains a simile that does not work
40.Read this extract: 'The corridor smelled of disinfectant and old rain. Somewhere a door closed. Then nothing.' What is the most likely purpose of the final short sentence?
Hard
- ATo create an uneasy pause and make the silence feel significant
- BTo explain how doors work
- CTo introduce a new character
- DTo list the senses in order
41.Complete the sentence about the craft of description.
Medium
Description is more than amassing details; it is bringing something to ____ by carefully choosing and arranging ____ and phrases.
42.What term describes an overwritten passage in which the writer strains too hard for an impressive effect?
Medium
43.What single term names the rhetorical mode whose purpose is to make a place, person, object or moment vivid for the reader?
Easy
44.Complete the sentence about the craft of description by filling each gap with one word.
Medium
Good description is more than the amassing of ____; it is bringing something to ____ by carefully choosing and arranging words and phrases to produce the desired ____.
45.What term describes an over-written passage in which the writer has strained too hard to achieve an impressive effect by elaborate figures or other means?
Medium
46.Complete the sentence about fiction-writing modes by filling each gap with one word.
Medium
In fiction writing, description is the mode for transmitting a mental ____ of the particulars of a story, and it sits alongside modes such as action, ____, summary and transition.
47.Which Roman poet first used the phrase 'purpureus pannus' in his Ars Poetica to denote an irrelevant and excessively ornate passage?
Medium
48.Complete the sentence about a common descriptive-writing fault by filling each gap with one word.
Medium
A purple patch is an over-written ____ in which the writer has strained too hard to achieve an impressive effect; such passages are usually ____ because they stand out awkwardly from the surrounding writing.
49.Which term describes a word that names a person, place, thing or idea?
Easy
50.Which term describes a word that modifies a verb, often telling us how, when or where something happens?
Easy
51.Complete the sentence about description by filling each gap with one word.
Medium
Description is any type of communication that aims to make ____ a place, object, person or other physical entity, and it is one of four rhetorical ____.
52.Which fiction-writing mode is used for transmitting a mental image of the particulars of a story?
Medium
53.Explain how a writer can use 'zooming in and out' to make a description more effective. Refer to the effect on the reader.
Hard
54.Explain how a writer can use the senses to make a description of a place more effective.
Medium
55.Read this extract: 'The beach was a battlefield of broken shells. Gulls screamed overhead, and the wind threw sand into my eyes.' Explain how the writer creates a harsh atmosphere. Refer to the writer's choice of words.
Hard
56.Read this extract: 'The corridor smelled of disinfectant and old rain. Somewhere a door closed. Then nothing.' Explain how the writer uses structure to create an uneasy atmosphere.
Hard

Resumos de revisão

## Descriptive Writing **Description** is any communication that aims to make vivid a place, object, person, group, or other physical entity. It is one of the four rhetorical modes (modes of discourse), along with exposition, argumentation, and narration. In fiction, description is the mode for transmitting a mental image of the particulars of a story. It is more than amassing details: it is bringing something to life by carefully choosing and arranging words and phrases to produce the desired effect. ### Key techniques - **Show, don't tell** – create a mental image rather than stating facts. - **Use the senses** – sight, sound, smell, touch, taste. - **Choose words precisely** – precise nouns, powerful verbs, carefully chosen adjectives. - **Figurative language** – metaphor, simile, personification. - **Zoom in and out** – move from wide view to close detail. - **Vary sentences** – change length and structure for effect. - **Avoid cliché** – steer clear of overused phrases. ### Planning Decide whether you are describing a **place, person, or moment**. Select details that bring it to life, and arrange them for effect. ### Beware purple prose A **purple patch** is an over-written passage in which the writer has strained too hard to achieve an impressive effect, by elaborate figures or other means. The phrase (Latin: *purpureus pannus*) was first used by the Roman poet Horace in his *Ars Poetica* (c. 20 BC) to denote an irrelevant and excessively ornate passage; the sense of irrelevance is normally absent in modern usage, although such passages are usually incongruous. By extension, **purple prose** is lavishly figurative, rhythmic, or otherwise overwrought. Aim for precise, controlled description rather than overwrought ornament. ### Exam checklist - Does my description make the subject vivid? - Have I used sensory detail? - Are my nouns precise and verbs powerful? - Have I used figurative language purposefully? - Have I varied sentence length and structure? - Have I avoided cliché and purple prose?

Description: Any type of communication that aims to make vivid a place, object, person, group, or other physical entity.
Rhetorical modes (modes of discourse): The four modes: exposition, argumentation, narration, and description.
Fiction-writing modes: Action, exposition, description, dialogue, summary, and transition.
Purple patch: An over-written passage in which the writer has strained too hard to achieve an impressive effect, by elaborate figures or other means.
Purple prose: Lavishly figurative, rhythmic, or otherwise overwrought writing.
Show, don't tell: A technique of creating a mental image through specific detail rather than stating facts directly.
Figurative language: Language using figures of speech such as metaphor, simile, and personification to create vivid effects.
Zooming in and out: Moving between a wide overview and close-up detail in a description.

Flashcards

What is the purpose of description in writing?

To make a place, object, person, group, or other physical entity vivid for the reader.

Name the four rhetorical modes of discourse.

Exposition, argumentation, narration, and description.

What is 'showing not telling' in descriptive writing?

It means using specific details and actions to let readers experience the scene, rather than simply stating facts or emotions.

Why is it important to use the senses in descriptive writing?

Using the senses (sight, sound, smell, taste, touch) creates a richer, more immersive experience for the reader.

What are precise nouns and why should you use them?

Precise nouns are specific, exact words (e.g., 'oak' instead of 'tree') that create clearer mental images.

What are powerful verbs and why are they effective?

Powerful verbs are strong, vivid action words (e.g., 'sprinted' instead of 'ran') that add energy and precision to writing.

How should adjectives be chosen in descriptive writing?

Adjectives should be carefully selected to add specific, meaningful detail, not just piled on.

What is figurative language?

Language that uses figures of speech (like similes, metaphors, personification) to create vivid comparisons or effects.

What does 'zooming in and out' mean in descriptive writing?

It means varying focus from a broad overview (zooming out) to a close-up detail (zooming in) to control pace and emphasis.

Why should you vary sentence lengths in a description?

Varying sentence lengths creates rhythm and emphasis, and can reflect the mood or pace of the scene.

What is a cliché in descriptive writing?

A cliché is an overused phrase or idea that has lost its impact (e.g., 'as white as snow').

Why should you avoid clichés?

Clichés make writing feel unoriginal and can weaken the reader's engagement; fresh imagery is more effective.

What is purple prose?

Purple prose is writing that is overly elaborate, ornate, or overwrought, often straining too hard for effect.

Who first used the term 'purple patch' and in what work?

The Roman poet Horace used it in his Ars Poetica (c. 20 BC) to denote an irrelevant and excessively ornate passage.

What is the difference between description and narration?

Description transmits a mental image of particulars, while narration tells a story or recounts events.

According to Writing from A to Z, what is description more than?

It is more than amassing details; it is bringing something to life by carefully choosing and arranging words and phrases to produce the desired effect.

What are some fiction-writing modes mentioned by Peter Selgin?

Action, dialogue, thoughts, summary, scenes, and description.

What is the role of description in fiction?

It is the mode for transmitting a mental image of the particulars of a story.

How can you make a description of a place effective?

By using sensory details, precise nouns, powerful verbs, figurative language, and varying sentence structure to create a vivid impression.

What is the effect of using too many adjectives?

It can make writing feel cluttered and weaken the impact; it's better to choose a few precise, powerful adjectives.

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