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Descriptive writing

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What descriptive writing does

  • Descriptive writing paints a picture in words, bringing a person, place or moment alive for the reader. It is often set by a prompt: an image, a title, or an opening such as "Describe a deserted street at night."
  • It is less about plot and more about atmosphere and detail.

Techniques

  • Use sensory language: sight, sound, smell, touch, taste. "The air smelt of damp earth and woodsmoke."
  • Use figurative language: similes, metaphors and personification. "The moon hung like a coin."
  • Choose precise vocabulary: verbs and adjectives that suggest more than basic words ("trudged", "glimmering").
  • Vary sentence patterns and lengths purposefully. A minor sentence may isolate a detail or create a pause; the effect depends on the surrounding writing.
  • Use concrete actions and sensory details to suggest feelings where useful. Direct statements and summary can also be effective; “show, don’t tell” is a technique, not an absolute rule.

An imagined bakery

An imagined bakery

Structure

  • Move through the scene in a clear order: zoom in from the wider view to details, or follow a journey through a place; shift the focus to sustain interest.
  • Keep viewpoint and time relationships clear. Deliberate shifts can work when signalled. Choose an opening and ending that suit the intended impression rather than following a fixed formula.

From a harbour view to a small detail

From a harbour view to a small detail

Avoid

  • Avoid vague, unselected adjective piles and accidental shifts of tense or viewpoint. Choose details for a purpose; an original use of a familiar phrase or a small action can still contribute to description.

Choose details for an impression

Choose details for an impressionOriginal detailPossible implicationKnuckles whitened on the railTension or fearA chair scraped in the empty roomIsolation or uneaseFlour drifted through warm lightCalm, busy atmosphere

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  1. 1.What is descriptive writing mostly about?

    Easy
    • Aatmosphere and detail
    • Bplot twists
    • Carguments
    • Dinstructions
  2. 2.Which sense is used in 'The air smelt of rain'?

    Easy
    • Asight
    • Btouch
    • Ctaste
    • Dsmell
  3. 3.What is a simile?

    Easy
    • Aa sound word
    • Ba fact
    • Ca comparison using 'like' or 'as'
    • Dan exaggeration
  4. 4.Which comparison is the clearest example of a familiar stock phrase?

    Easy
    • Athe street breathed
    • Bwhite as snow
    • Cthe moon hung like a cracked coin
    • Dfrost gripped the window
  5. 5.What does 'zoom in' mean in description?

    Easy
    • Amove from a wide view to details
    • Bshorten the piece
    • Cadd a title
    • Duse only adjectives
  6. 6.Which verb is more precise than 'walked'?

    Easy
    • Awent
    • Bdid
    • Cmoved
    • Dtrudged
  7. 7.Which is the best description of a quiet street?

    Easy
    • AQuiet street.
    • BIt was quiet and nice.
    • CA single cat slid between parked cars; somewhere a tap dripped.
    • DThe street was quiet.
  8. 8.What can the minor sentence “Silence.” do after a paragraph of noisy action?

    Easy
    • Amake the passage grammatically unacceptable
    • Bisolate and emphasise the change to quiet
    • Cautomatically introduce a list
    • Dalways make every passage faster

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